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I love the colours, the three bands or layers in this and the action! Judges always want a focal point - hmmmn! I would choose the gull with darker wings on the upbeat, it's on a third-ish!? Again, as it's a Pictorial entry you can do anything. I would remove anything which is just on the Edge - there are several on the right and one I can see on the left. More importantly, your horizon is not straight! You'd be marked down for that! Otherwise, I think this is a great picture - well done!
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I agree on focal point comment above.
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Ian is so right, sinds it is a Pictorial shot you could have removed some birds cut off at the edge. For me it would also have been better with just a sliver of beach at the bottom.
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Yes I agree with Bert's comment about the sliver of beach - much better!
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